In my most recent assessment essay on accent and dialect, I found out that although my AO2 was strong, I still need to further support my analysis. My AO1 was the weakest and therefore in order to improve I must use more language levels within my next essay.
In order to improve my essay, I need to start developing both my arguement and judgement with the use of my personal opinion. I must also being to use theory and data to prove my point, rather than just describing the theory.
My own personal target is to ensure a further use of language levels to make my writing stronger.
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